Graffiti Bridge is a journey into the imagery that transforms the infamous Graffiti Bridge from ugly industrialization into the ever evolving canvas of temporary art that it has become.
Tuesday, June 30, 2009
The top image is my new cover which I do like a lot better without the tile and name over it. The two images under it aretwo versions of my title page under the cover.
The new front cover looks awesome and I like the first example for your title page. The writing looks like more a part of the picture than the second one. Can't wait to see more!
the new cover page and title pages are going to work out well. they look really good. i think the first title page looks more like the words are inside the picture and not on it.
I definitely love the new title page; the text is much easier to read and looks better aesthetically. I feel as if you could put one of the last two photos as your cover page and the first image could possibly be your back cover.
I like the fact that there is no title on the cover. The images convey your story without it. The first title page is more natural and makes me eager to get started.
Much better! LOVE it! This cover works great! I think I like the first title page best! You created a really nice vantage point with the writing! I can't wait to see the final book & more pics! :D
The new front cover looks awesome and I like the first example for your title page. The writing looks like more a part of the picture than the second one. Can't wait to see more!
ReplyDelete-Sarah
this is really good. your last images are reaaly working well as your title page. i Love it.
ReplyDeleteyeah the new covers look way better. good work
ReplyDeleteIt's looking really good! I like the first example for you title page as well. :)
ReplyDeleteit looks good. i'm glad you opted to save the writing for the inside image inside of writing over the photos on the cover.
ReplyDeleteI love the new cover. Looks great.
ReplyDeleteYep. This is the jam.
ReplyDeleteGood work Sky! Very professional!
x,v
I like the first cover the most. It looks absolutely beautiful, Sky!
ReplyDeletethe new cover is so great! i love that u have it seperated,i think it shows more of the great color that way.
ReplyDeletethe new cover page and title pages are going to work out well. they look really good. i think the first title page looks more like the words are inside the picture and not on it.
ReplyDeleteThe new cover and the title page look great! I think you should go with the first title page, looks more natural. Great work!
ReplyDeleteDanielle
Looking good. Cover looks more intact without the text, I'm digging it.
ReplyDeleteI definitely love the new title page; the text is much easier to read and looks better aesthetically. I feel as if you could put one of the last two photos as your cover page and the first image could possibly be your back cover.
ReplyDelete--Nick Miller
I like the fact that there is no title on the cover. The images convey your story without it. The first title page is more natural and makes me eager to get started.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to see what else you drum up!
Elaine
Much better! LOVE it! This cover works great! I think I like the first title page best! You created a really nice vantage point with the writing! I can't wait to see the final book & more pics! :D
ReplyDeleteNew cover is great! It looks very proffesional and well put together! You are on the right track!
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